Today I saw presentations of my fellow clasmates and I relaize there are many things I should change on mine. I realize I should ionclude more pictures and more color to the background. I really like to just use color in the font rather than a pixelled picture in the backround. 

Also I realized I should proofread my work and you can ask that to Miss Fenton and she;ll agree. Grammar and spelling weren't bad but they oculd be better. Also I should be more careful in the order of the slides and the effects i use. The timming is also very important because hosrt presentations make it loook not complete and long presentations make it look boring. I feel like i could wiork more in the citations. I resally could use a little more time to revise my project.